- … your tendency to be more verbose and general in the way you move around your interests.
- a clearer method and a more precise focus on its affects on perception (towards the end of the project)
- Your research would greatly benefit from engaging with more examples of digital publishing
- focusing on developing your technical and conceptual knowledge here would be very beneficial
- More in depth critical analysis, and evaluation on the effects of your experiments
- you have a comfort zone in being more esoteric