Key take-aways from assessment feedback 28/09/21

  • … your tendency to be more verbose and general in the way you move around your interests.
  • a clearer method and a more precise focus on its affects on perception (towards the end of the project)
  • Your research would greatly benefit from engaging with more examples of digital publishing
  • focusing on developing your technical and conceptual knowledge here would be very beneficial
  • More in depth critical analysis, and evaluation on the effects of your experiments
  • you have a comfort zone in being more esoteric

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